Difference between revisions of "Introducing Hilarity"
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Revision as of 13:48, 8 March 2006
Chadius: We should probably introduce Hilarity. Bish is coming back from the supermarket and she blew up something...or something like that.
Aurora: Like, smoke coming from the basement, Bish panicking and dragging her out, then her going "ooo, candy!" and completely oblivious to the damage to his house?
Chadius: Yeah, that's pretty kewl. Lemme dump this into a wiki.
Aurora: needs more expansion. perhaps some eyerolling from bish and getting a fire extinguisher, showing that this happens all the time.
Panels & Stuff:
1 - Bish's kitchen. Bish is in background, coming in from garage with groceries in bag. Smoke is seeping out from under a closed door on the side. Bish looks surprised.
2 - No people in scene. Door is now open, smoke is pouring out. Sound effects.
3 - Bish appears with Hilarity in arms. His hair is mussed. They're both smudged with dirt. She looks unconscious.
4 - Hilarity looks all starry eyed up at Bish.
5 - Hilarity has candy. Yay!
6 - Bish eyerolls, fire extinguisher in hand, smoke still pouring out from the basement. Hilarity is munching on a wrapped candy bar.
1 B: Groceries - *sigh* Great, a fire.
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4 B: Hilarity. What was it this time? Insurance will go insane-
5 (Hilarity jumps to the bag, grabs the candy, and jumps forward. I want 3 pics of her to cover this motion. They'll be in a single panel to represent the one quick motion she performs.)
- In Bish's arms
- Next to the groceries, reaching for the bar.
- Off to the side, munching on the bar.
H: Candy!
6 bish sighs. The automated maintenance system has sprouted a fire extinguisher from the ground, next to Bish (A carefully hidden hole in the ground, I suppose.) Bish reaches for it. Hilarity is rilfing through the bag, searching for more candy. (Hmm, need to show the house damaged, so we can drive that point home.)